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Taylor:

I could picture every line in my head extremely vividly. This is a great piece. Kind of sad, but very real. It was put together beautifully.

I love this because I can really relate. I have a great vision of what my life could be like, but instead I wake up, go to school, go to work, and the same thing happens every single day.

"Adventures make close friends become family."

I love that, and it's really true. I grew up with the same people that I'm friends with now, but it was adventure that made us family.

This was amazing. Touched part of my heart not touched in a while. "I do know the storm will end."  We can hope.

"For years I sought happiness in the saddest of places."

That breaks my heart, but it's a very great poem. 

Nichole:

"I am afraid to be myself." This makes me sad because of how true it is. In today's world, people are so afraid to be themselves in fear of other people judging. I wish the world wasn't like that.

I like this. I also wish I could fly away from all those things...

Haha "And sometimes forgot to fix their hair." I love that, because I can totally relate.

The first paragraph made me fall in love with Florida all over again. Awesome :)

The last piece was awesome. Kind of reminds me of El Dorado... Would make an awesome story :)