Wednesday, September 7, 2016

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Hey Kam :) I can't really relate to any sporty like things, but I can relate to the sentence "I couldn't tell you why the baseball has become so important to me, but I don't know what I'd do without it." That's how I feel about some pillow with a duck face on it. No idea why it's important, but it is. Great story, I can tell that you were talking about something you care deeply about. :) 

Hey Kam :) "A disney dolphin, cherokee indian, and kickapoo chief." Makes me realize how much we've all grown up and how much we've all really been through. Reminded me of how good of friends we were back in elementary school :)


I'm in love with how the story played out. Not every story has to be peachy and princessy and you have Sally a happy ending, in her own dark and twisty way kind of. The words "I am finally free." kept ringing in my ears even after I read the story. As a broadcast junkie, I can just picture how I could turn this into the greatest literature to life film. If I ever get the time, I'd love to work on making this into a short video! The way you talked about everything makes it easy to picture. :)


Hey Echo! I can relate to the part where you talked about your bond with your brother. MY brother is older so he's the one who sees when I don't, but we also have the unbreakable bond you talked about. And I can also relate to the part about happily married parents. This was very well written and it really showed us a small glimpse of who you are :)


Hey, Nichole :) I like the way the story unfolds in my mind. The image it gives me, especially in the part where the dragon hit her with his tail.


Hey Nichole! I can relate to the part about screaming and laughing kids in Florida. I went there last summer with my sister's family :)


Wow. This definitely hit some places that haven't been hit. I love how you used the box as a symbol rather than an object. This story was deep and made my brain wiggle and jiggle in my head. Good job on really beautifully portraying the symbolism :)


I can relate to the part about you and your brother. Mine is older, but there are definitely some fights to share :)


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  1. Thanks for taking the time to connect with your classmates and their writing and for offering such thoughtful feedback.

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