Monday, September 12, 2016

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Kam:
Capri- I love that you wrapped up your poem the same way you unfolded it. Awesome :)

Ocean Side- I love the words you use, like "aquatic beast"  :)

Stone White- Really painted a picture of winter in my mind

Haiku's-  The one about mythic green for some reason made me picture old miners in the fall walking home with some gold

Kat:
Haiku's- Your haiku's made me think of spring :)

Acrostic- Reminded me of the movie Open Season where they all throw the hunters out. I just love the line "dancing across the grass"  Paints a picture of the animals "owning the land" :)

Caitlyn's Kelly- Probably crying right now, honestly. This definitely broke my heart.

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  1. Thanks for taking the time to be a friendly reader for your classmates!

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