Monday, September 12, 2016
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Kam:
Capri- I love that you wrapped up your poem the same way you unfolded it. Awesome :)
Ocean Side- I love the words you use, like "aquatic beast" :)
Stone White- Really painted a picture of winter in my mind
Haiku's- The one about mythic green for some reason made me picture old miners in the fall walking home with some gold
Kat:
Haiku's- Your haiku's made me think of spring :)
Acrostic- Reminded me of the movie Open Season where they all throw the hunters out. I just love the line "dancing across the grass" Paints a picture of the animals "owning the land" :)
Caitlyn's Kelly- Probably crying right now, honestly. This definitely broke my heart.
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